Haiku

Mar. 25th, 2002 06:49 pm
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cat purring on lap
I type with only one hand
she demands them both

Date: 2002-03-25 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] broin.livejournal.com
That's not haiku. That's just a poem. =)

Haiku has a reversal of meaning, or other clever bit, in the last stanza.

Something more like:

I have two hands
But I type with just one
Cat on lap


Would be better. Though it needs more syllables, obviously.

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