Because, although Julie just shouted into the room "Andy, there is an interaction I need to have with you." it's clearly dialogue that no real person would ever utter.
(I've just been reading this review of Anathem, wherein he makes exactly that complaint about a line of dialogue that sounds exactly like things I've heard geeks say down the pub.)
(I've just been reading this review of Anathem, wherein he makes exactly that complaint about a line of dialogue that sounds exactly like things I've heard geeks say down the pub.)
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Date: 2009-02-03 04:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-02-03 04:51 pm (UTC)well up his own orifice and smugly pleased with himeself to be so!
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Date: 2009-02-03 04:56 pm (UTC)I'm 2/3 of the way through it, and very much enjoying it.
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Date: 2009-02-03 05:02 pm (UTC)It is of course entirely possible that visual studio crashing every 10 minutes has given me a sense-of-humour failure for the day :)
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Date: 2009-02-03 11:25 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2009-02-03 05:32 pm (UTC)That's the thing about his stuff, sometimes they explain gently, sometimes they explain hard, but they're always explaining. It's like a version of 'tell don't show' taken hard and to the extreme to justify its use.
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Date: 2009-02-03 06:05 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-02-11 08:58 pm (UTC)But seriously, Roberts has a ...somewhat different... idea of what good science fiction should be like than Anathem delivers. I can see the merit in his review, even if I did love the novel.
And there is of course a case to be made that Stephenson went a bit overboard here and the book lost some of the traditional qualities of the novel. It is somewhat of an 1200 page infodump...
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Date: 2009-02-13 08:55 pm (UTC)I'm only 2/3 of the way through Anathem at the moment, and I current think that he has a definite point about it - it's too infodump heavy, and the flow of the book would probably be better without the action bits getting in the way of it :->