andrewducker (
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06:49 pm
Haiku
cat purring on lap
I type with only one hand
she demands them both
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broin.livejournal.com
2002-03-25 03:28 pm (UTC)
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That's not haiku. That's just a poem. =)
Haiku has a reversal of meaning, or other clever bit, in the last stanza.
Something more like:
I have two hands
But I type with just one
Cat on lap
Would be better. Though it needs more syllables, obviously.
Ha!
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2002-03-25 23:32 (UTC)
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Haiku has a reversal of meaning, or other clever bit, in the last stanza.
Something more like:
I have two hands
But I type with just one
Cat on lap
Would be better. Though it needs more syllables, obviously.
Ha!